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   cormell

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   05 July 2018, 4:51AM

   Really good story. The pix you used for the dialogue were fantastic. Very enjoyable.
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   Lee5Lee

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   04 July 2018, 7:36PM

   Yesss, new chapter! ^_^ It has been a long time, but it all worthed it ^_^ Butcher soungs pretty cool!
   Awesome shots and witty funny dialogues, can't wait for next one!
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   Heresthewolfman

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   04 July 2018, 7:24PM

   Man, was I glad to see this posted. I'll have to backtrack and re-read the previous parts of the series, as its been awhile, but I remember the content well enough for something I read over a year ago. Your characters are memorable, and your dialogue is really natural. I really like the quips, they add a lot of character to this part and make the relationships between the characters believable
   
   Really glad to see you're back, both your's and Carnagefiend's content (and comments) really piqued my interest in the Imageshare and inspired me to try my hand at the medium, and reinvigorated my interest in writing in general. So, thanks man.
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   User_42537105

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   04 July 2018, 3:03PM

   So full disclosure - before reading this, I went back first to read the prior chapters and look at your other work. Now, I can honestly say welcome back.
   
   Almost unnoticed, along with some of the best screen archers around, there is work like yours that makes a cup of good coffee on a beautiful July 4th morning just more enjoyable. Story, screens, imaginative takes on a familiar story, mixed with humor and banter makes your stories a good read. There are other really good story tellers here that I hope you catch up on and I hope others take time to catch up on yours. I gave you kudos a couple of chapters back, because of some of your originality.
   
   Glad you're back and continuing this work. Happy and safe Independence Day to you
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   carnagefiend

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   04 July 2018, 1:48PM

   I laughed aloud at that shot with Mel, holy shit. The comment about the grenade also came nearly at the same time I was musing about how ridiculous her outfit is. Points to Gryffindor for that too.
   
   Reading this definitely makes me glad you're back, it's nice to see someone writing up an in-game scene and actually managing to put their own twist on it. Lots of attention to detail, behaviors, mannerisms, and accounting for skills (the hacking thing was a nice touch).
   
   Bravo!