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   FastBlackCat

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   07 March 2016, 11:39PM

   D: D: D: Somehow I missed this before. Well, this is a great, great set, Laird--sorry for the belated comment.
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   cormell

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   01 February 2016, 6:21AM

   A little late on getting back to your comments. I was rebuilding my game. No idea what happened Max won't sit anymore.
   
   Anyway thanks for the comments and encouragement. Rough friendliness -- I like that. It puts a term to what I was trying to do. Thanks, janswin.
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   RatherWindy

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   31 January 2016, 9:43AM

   I liked this a lot,. and saw that you had written quite a bit before also.
   I like the "tone" of the story, it has a kind of rough friendliness to it,.. wich i think is fitting for it,..
   Nice images also,..
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   Bernt

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   31 January 2016, 8:45AM

   "Everything that can be misunderstood WILL be misunderstood. And what cannot be misunderstood will be anyway." Base rule when issuing orders as told by an instructor when I was promoted - to Corporal......
   JoJo is used to men exploiting her weakness - her constant looking for the next meal and a place to sleep - or TRYING to take advantage of herat least. Max' offer was sincere but how would she know? It will take some time before she learns that at least some men can be trusted. A heartwarming chapter this one
   
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   DPnavpoc

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   31 January 2016, 1:12AM

   good story.
   
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   Raexus

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   31 January 2016, 12:40AM

   Excellent pose and light composition.
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   Jupitus

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   31 January 2016, 12:23AM

   Great shots, posing and positioning.