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   02 April 2016, 5:20AM

   leave only the eyes glowing in face... it focuses the menace... otherwise it just becomes bland... you need the contrast of dark and light... very nice work mate... let the light run to the edges of the face from the body...
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      MadMAX713

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      02 April 2016, 5:38AM

      the problem with no glowing on the face except the eyes is that a behemoths eye is extremely small, barely noticeable. the other is covered up, you cant see it. i have since toned down the glow on the face, and added an extremely bright glow to the inside of his mouth. the behemoth roars every time he swings, and opens his mouth really wide, exposing a very bright mouth, its quite cool.
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      SephDragoon

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      08 April 2016, 5:53AM

      I still agree here. What you could do is actually leave a glow 'around' the eyes, like an 'eye aura' to increase size and notice-ability, but leave the rest of the face more like the glowing mutant in the other picture.
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   MadMAX713

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   02 April 2016, 4:51AM

   any critisism is greatly appreciated
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      ixdontxmiss

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      02 April 2016, 5:02AM

      Nope nope nope nope nope nope!
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      a_blind_man

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      04 April 2016, 3:24PM

      Looks great so far! Only thing I can think of is to make the glowing areas follow veins/arteries. So have a couple of thick ones up the neck and down arms and legs, then smaller ones branching off. There's a lot of incredibly vascular body builders on google images if you want to look for inspiration!
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   xXBalthorXx

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   02 April 2016, 4:32PM

   The texture looks a bit low-res (nothing your skills can't fix), maybe you should do less lines but thicker or brighter. I'm loving how you placed the glowing lines in the same spots as his normal texture instead of putting glowing lines on top of it at random, great work man.
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   radiomasson

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   02 April 2016, 11:08AM

   this gold pure gold!