The Beging

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The Couier
My Story by Nathan.



Chapter One: The Beging.
I just got landed a pretty good job dlivering a thing to Mr.House, I was in the Office in Primm with the other Couier's i didn't know them but they seem to know each other n worst me they were eyeing me n keeping thire space. I sat at the bar waiting for a man named Johnson Nash who runs the office here. " Alright Mr. House gave you some items he wants deliver and there's a good price on them too if you make it to the drop off point." mean while Benny and some Great Kahns were setting up along the route were the Couier was goin to walk down. " Boss how do we know he will come down this road?" one of the Kahn's said Benny, " I got this feeling he's going to show up any min now just watch the road''. Back at the office in Primm i was getting ready to leave and head out the door. I thought to myself wow a big chip i'm carring and some heavy caps nice. As i countiue to walk i herd some movement behind me i turn n it was to lat WHACK!!!!

first storie hope u like tell me what u think

3 comments

  1. ToshiroIreto
    ToshiroIreto
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    Love the Spelling,keep it up.
  2. Bernt
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    Off to a good start. But you might want to do a bit about your spelling. I would think the spell checker is F7 on your (English?) keyboard as well as on my Danish. Also your pics will look better without the HUD :-)
  3. ArmoredCascade
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    hope u guy's like new n my first time