Oblivion
Broken Nightmare

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Fixed within and lost to self
A tried and true beginnings cost
Trails in life a death no home
A change I saw held death on high
It's cold alone blood moves slow
What painful grace one life's theme
not love nor life not pain or sin
Holds the cruelty and lights within
Broken found dream now dims light

Change moves on and blood will flow
Can one dim what lights within all
trails through darkness vision sight
leaves breath gasping blood runs out
Trails in darkness a waking days end
not love nor life not pain or sin
gone is the light though even in dawn
Awoke with a scream no dying mans dream...

18 comments

  1. zeroxee
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    I like this... alot
  2. Mogadin
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    I have given this image my endorsement.

    Wow what a mood this sets, awesome poem.
    Kneeling among the fallen as though to gather souls, then telling of there story. Beautifully done
  3. Ithildin
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    I have given this image my endorsement.

    Unusual.
  4. Lisnpuppy
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    I have given this image my endorsement.

    I love the red and black coloring. Awesome
  5. vvk78
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    I have given this image my endorsement.

    Morbid scene. Fabulous capture and poem! Thumbs up!
  6. BlueDanube
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    I have given this image my endorsement.

    nevertough you can write a good poem too tree :p
    i really want to know what inspire it,highly detailed,good pose and of course she's a babe.nicely done.
  7. Amidana
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    I have given this image my endorsement.

    I think this is what all the pictures should look like. And I do not mean the quality, I mean the feelings. What point is there in posting a half naked girl without any philosophy in it?
    Your poetry is something that brings picture alive.
  8. Boss1985
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    I have given this image my endorsement.

    Nice imba girl
  9. xXBabyDreXx
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    I have given this image my endorsement.

    this poem is.....wow so beautiful...really touches me!hmm youve really got a talent for that^.^ ahhh and awesome shot too!x)
  10. chakaru11
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    I have given this image my endorsement.

    Wow, that poem really is beautiful. The screenshot fits perfectly and although it is so different from what you usually do, it's still totally YOU. Love it *saves both*