Oblivion
Imperfect

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Am I beautiful what have I done
As I remain yet still only one
I am lifes breath caught in time
Breathing or sleeping do I shine
A change I am and dream am not
Your love or mine and who forgot
Beats in time as simple divine
My place just one just stay in line
As tragedy still and as life in doubt
Holds the head high in a space without
Bring me the death your frail heart
I am careless and free for the start
Longer we see into ones belief of
In spite we arise a push is a shove
No longer I be what you cant find
No longer you visualize me as divine
Analyze my fear when lost all alone
Shall I just stay away for your throne

32 comments

  1. zeroxee
    zeroxee
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    Awesomeness mixed with beauty
  2. z50boysock89
    z50boysock89
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    I have given this image my endorsement.

    good
  3. LaughingVampire
    LaughingVampire
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    I have given this image my endorsement.

    Beautiful Char,Image,scenery(at least to me), and very beautiful poem !
  4. ZhoulTheDarkElf
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    I have given this image my endorsement.

    Great Image Thank you!
  5. kirinann
    kirinann
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    I have given this image my endorsement.

    Beautiful girl!

    I love your poem, it's lovely and full of emotion.
  6. Ilwenray85
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    I have given this image my endorsement.

    Wonderful image.
    The poem... i dont understand it all but i like what i do.
  7. siffreo
    siffreo
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    I have given this image my endorsement.

    She is attractive!
  8. TreborMarg
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    Awww saved?! *gushes* and more like page 50 I bet for this one now XD
  9. chakaru11
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    I have given this image my endorsement.

    Oh wow. This is ridiculously awesome and I love it.

    Damn, I wish I already had internet at home again, I hate missing out on endorsing screenshots because they have already moved on to page 5 or whatever. *saved*
  10. TreborMarg
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    Thanks for all your comments everyone

    @greentarra, Yaaayy !! Someone got onto the ridiculous close up of her ring, I was setting up the shot when I realized how detailed and awesome the ring looks. I got it from the Heroes Store by apachii, in case anyone wants one