Oblivion
Pym Wydra and Sadryn

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Note: For the musicians, there is a poly-rhythm in the verse ;)


Lost in the tunnels of hate...
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I awoke to see, time out of mind like a storm at sea
At once they stand, right before us in a demons land
lean back to breathe, fires ignite us all then leave
Nothing left but ash, tunnels of hate our only path

The color green where jealousy lies,
a cold blue yellow of peace despised.

Breathe once and choke, hatred fills the lung with smoke
Live life or die, sadness underneath where anger lies
Fell down so low, life full of emotion in undertow
Called back to dwell, at times called a living hell

The color purple is like anger new,
with fires of red and freezing blue.

Pushing pulling, defend to the end of living
Hopeless fires burn, eat the ash fulfill your turn
Cry not for self, blow everything to hell or else
See truth in lies, holds fire close now to realize

The color orange lays deep in the heart,
love bleeds red and yellow peace will start.

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Meh... yea, yea, you know... balance... tears and or laughter.

49 comments

  1. zeroxee
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    Nice
  2. Aphazel
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    I have given this image my endorsement.

    Very beautifull picture. The text below is interesting but, I endured some difficulties to read it to the end... As many other peoples, I was distracted...
  3. TreborMarg
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    Thanks everyone

    @Odile, umm... I wrote a poem for this? All I remember are the boobies... next thing someone's gonna say they are in a tunnel somewhere 0,O
  4. Odile
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    I have given this image my endorsement.

    I tried to read the poem/song, but I kept being distracted by boobies.
  5. DomHoward
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    I have given this image my endorsement.

    nice
  6. wolfsangeleyes
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    I have given this image my endorsement.

    Nice image accompagnied by strong powerful words.
  7. Paka
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    I have given this image my endorsement.

    I have to endorse this image great work and great words
  8. TreborMarg
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    Thanks so much for all your wonderful, sweet and funny comments everyone, it's very inspirational for me

    Btw, be careful readmore.... those really are some dangerous purples LOL
  9. readmore
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    I have given this image my endorsement.

    Terrific image! Hope she doesn't put my eye out with those... swords. But you're going to have to post a sound file of the poem, coz I couldn't get the poly rhythm just from reading it. (My eyeballs are tone-deaf, probably from staring too long at... all that purple...).;->
  10. discovery1
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    I have given this image my endorsement.

    nicely done, and great words..
    rob you are a poet and you know it!