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   aok

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   15 July 2013, 11:36PM

   Love the "awkward moment"
   Great stuff!!!
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      zeroxee

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      19 July 2013, 11:46AM

      "Awkward moments" are awesome... haha thankssss! ^^
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   Nataly1q2w3e4r5t

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   13 July 2013, 8:33AM

   Wonderfully new chapter, beautifully written and with awesome shots! Alana is so shy, and Lydia's tactless comment has gotten her, this Lydia is very straight forward it seems, but still loyal, which is very good. I liked this scene with Irene and Alana when they went out of the city slightly touching hands, there were no words needed, their cute reaction to each other explained it all and finally the rude guard got what he deserved, hope it will be a lesson for him. The innkeeper had terrible sense of humor and I very much like how Irene is so protective of her friends and how she cares about them. and it seems she and Alana have great new addition to their group, fierce and beautiful sisters Louise and Sighne. I am sure that with such company their travels will never be boring!
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      zeroxee

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      14 July 2013, 11:50AM

      I dont know if she's really shy but i decided through my story she is shy which i think suits her. Lydia suits to be a straight forward and loyal woman as much as she's strong willed as a Warrior.. Irene respect her as much as she respect Irene No words needed to something which can be shown through silent touches! ^^
      Thank you so much for keep liking the chapters!
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   Heaventhere

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   13 July 2013, 12:37AM

   Lol got to love that Lydia, she has no tact, and will say whatever comes to her mind when it comes to her Thane but she is loyal and will be right there when needed,
   
   My favorite part was of them walking out the gate, their fingers just lightly touching as they walk, no words needed, just being with each other enough. Lovely screens, love the way they interact with each other and the people they meet, amazing banter!!! Oh and Brynjolf a good man hmmm, I think that is something he keeps hidden. Cant wait to see what happens next!! Wonderful chapter my friend!!
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      zeroxee

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      13 July 2013, 1:09AM

      Heh, yea.. its all Lydia.. probably as we all know her, eh.. or wait.. i hope... um.. please dont hate me! the most important is that she's loyal and wont backstab her Thane!
      YES, you noticed.. i decided to not include that into my story cause "stating the obvious" and showing it through image(s) instead. No words need to be spoken for what can be told by closeness. ^^ Thank you very much!
      Well.. Brynjolf is at least kind to Aranya it seems... i dont want to mix up into their... lets say... um.. privacy cause that would've been rude, wouldnt it?
      Thanks again, my friend!
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   Gweneal

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   12 July 2013, 11:50PM

   LOL, loved to read this. The best part for me was when Louise made her entrance. Can see her doing that actually, she always seemed a very cute, tomboyish girl!
   
   I'm very glad to have come across this. Amazing shots too, I actually like the interiors as dark as this.
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      zeroxee

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      13 July 2013, 1:04AM

      Hehe, yea.. she's cute, pretty and shy.. a reason it suited better for her happen to than Sighne. Glad you liked it!
      Thank you very much! yea.. the ENB is great.. and the best of it all... its not too much fps demanding... well.. ofcourse it makes my laptop's fan go crazy but that does all ENBs on Skyrim played on my pc.. xD
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   deleted1123719

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   12 July 2013, 12:58PM

   I loved the beginning with Alana's embarrassment at Lydia's none-too-discreet comments! What a cheek she has to speak so to her Dragonborn's mistress! Loved the way Irene handled that gropey guard and adored the introduction of Sig and Louise! Very nicely done. Nice to hear from Aranya and I'm glad she's found herself a good(?) man in Brynjolf. Very nice chapter sweetie!
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      zeroxee

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      12 July 2013, 1:18PM

      Haha, i actually chuckled while writing the beginning.. glad you liked it aswell! well, Lydia isnt a shy one, and deffinately not afraid of saying her meanings... though she is also careful what to always say to Irene her Thane but they two has such great trust in eachother even though Lydia doesnt come with her that much into adventuring they trust eachother greatly and arent afraid of making jokes towards eachother.
      Thank you very much, dear! I myself think Brynjolf even if he's a part of the Thieve's Guild that he's a kind man... one of the kindest there, Delvin seems alright but he can be a perv at times according to watching Vexy.
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   11 July 2013, 8:28PM

   lol, this was cool meeting! As always very lovely written, Stig
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      zeroxee

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      11 July 2013, 9:04PM

      I always try to figure out how the different meetings with certain followers will be... but trying my best to not copy anything from earlier chapters etc etc... its not easy but thank you very much for liking it, Marina!
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      mymajestymv

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      12 July 2013, 10:27AM

      I see, you have a lot of stories, and still able to do new! Envy your imagination
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      zeroxee

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      12 July 2013, 11:56AM

      Hehe, i guess its my mind who desirve the positive feedbacks.. thank you!
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   Kamikazekossori

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   11 July 2013, 11:16PM

   Those parts about Lydia's words making Alana's cheeks red after the two lovebirds climbed down from their room and how Irene dealt with that foolish guard were so amusing, I can so see Alana blushing and the steam coming out of that guards helmet Seems there little trip to the meadery was a wise choice meeting those shield sisters there, though in a bit of an odd way with Louise knocking Irene over, looks like those four will find quite the adventure in those lands of ash and snow, look forward to those adventures
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      zeroxee

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      12 July 2013, 10:26AM

      Hihihi, would've been great to actually have scripted the game such as seeing her blush for real.. Thank you very much!
      I'm still not quite sure if i will write stories during their stay in Solstheim though... only screenshots.. but i might put in little texts instead.. will see...
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   Yyna

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   11 July 2013, 8:49PM

   Love the story! (Heh, I always do) And this meeting was indeed a unique and great one!
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      zeroxee

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      11 July 2013, 9:05PM

      And i always love to hear feedbacks like that! Thank you very much, Krisztina!
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   Kalilies

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   11 July 2013, 7:14PM

   Lol, Louise is so clumsy xD
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      zeroxee

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      11 July 2013, 7:33PM

      Hehe, i first thought about Sighne to crash into Irene but.. then i thought it would more likely fit better into their persionality that Louise would crash instead... I THINK... please dont hate me..
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      Caelrya

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      11 July 2013, 8:26PM

      Lovely! You're such an amazing writer! Cant wait for the next chapter!
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      zeroxee

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      11 July 2013, 9:03PM

      Naaw.. *blush* thanks, Cael! ^^
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    11 July 2013, 6:50PM

    Jeg hadde aldri trudd at jeg skulle sitte å glise etter å ha lest en historie, men du er jo helt rå! Brilliant!
    Så gøy at Louise og Sighne fikk joine gruppa til Irene og Alana! Kjempespent på neste kapittel, og håper at Louise oppfører seg! (^____^)
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       zeroxee

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       11 July 2013, 7:32PM

       Å nei.. å jeg som lovte å si fra når jeg lasted opp dette... sorry
       Men.. wow.. takk skal du ha *blush* ... godt å høre at jeg får deg til å glise under lesingen
       Hehe, får no se om hun virkelig gjør det.. started bra me å kræsje rett inn i Irene så begge faller kanskje grunnen til at hun var så stille under samtalen senere..
       Takk igjen!