Things Better Left Forgotten - Chapter 01
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36 comments
A good start, both pics and story! (Now, on to the next...)
All of them awesome! Can't wait for more and to see what has changed for Teyla
Glad it was a nightmare...
It was a real pleasure to read, my friend. Your writing has improved greatly, it was a very good idea to use more minimalistic technique. The story is relatively shorter than others, but it is so much stronger because you knew where to place the "accents" - thanks to this it is so much stronger. The "bone deep life stealing cold" line is just perfect! The dream/nightmare theme is one of my favourites and this piece is a fantastic representative of it, especially that Teyla's vision was so blury, with uncertain conclusion, consisting mainly of the things she sensed rather than thought. Wonderful!
Images are, as always, fantastic. You have a gift of showing pure emotions through imagery. This is an absolutely delightul piece.
About the PDF - that's a really good idea! It's much more comfortable to read a story in a single file, change the size of the page and see bigger images.
And thank you for advertising my work, you're a dear!
I like the idea of having them already in pdf form available for anyone who wishes.. and then never know when I might want to go back over them in the future heh
Great opener Sean, great to see Teyla again. Looking forward to more.
Thanks for the link.
You are welcome
Cheers Sean!!
BTW "Ctrl" "+" worked like a charm for this!