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   0nelazyBattlemaga

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   12 November 2014, 7:37AM

   Excellent, now I have to read back. just to see if...
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   wolfgrimdark

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   29 September 2014, 10:51PM

   Awesome story Sean - really liked how you used the book to insert a bunch of lore on the Succubi. Did you get that from mythology? Was very interesting to read more about Teylas race (I also know there is a male version, the Incubus) and seems like she is trying to be good - worried about Delean and what she might have done for him. How odd it must be for her to have to learn about herself from a book. Some very nice shots as well with just the touch of erotica. A shame Delean may not remember that pleasurable night though.
   
   Curious to see what might be happening down in the village - they seem to be at odds with the college so interesting that they asked for some help.
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   AaronOfMpls

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   25 September 2014, 11:03PM

   Hmmm, some interesting "dreams" indeed... Nice bit with the book, too, and Delaen startling her.
   
   Nicely done, both pics and story!
   
   (And I'll have to go through your older Teyla stories sometime, to see more of her past and how she got here.)
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   aok

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   18 September 2014, 6:47AM

   Absolutely loved this!!! So having some interesting dreams Delaen? I bet!
   Brilliant work in telling this from Teyla's thoughts.
   Like Carnage, I wonder what has happened to Annette? Could Teyla have had something to do with it?
   What is Teyla feeds too many times from Delaen?
   How did she get to this point from who she was in the past???
   So many questions!!!!! More More!!!
   Epic work showing the drawing in the book! Did you draw that? Great job!
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   DiscipleOfCarnage

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   17 September 2014, 11:48PM

   As with all of your masterpieces, you did a wonderful job on this set. I really like how you keep a sense of mystery in all of your stories, as well as a host of cool and unique images (some of which I'm sure you use Illusion magic to create ;-).
   
   I'm still curious to know what the heck happened to Teyla's friend, Annette, but it can't be good considering the creature that kidnapped her was pretty nasty looking.
   
   Hopefully the next chapter comes out soon... :-)
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   deleted1123719

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   17 September 2014, 12:05PM

   Great chapter. Nice background info on succubi (those book shots are amazing) and I love how Teyla got so engrossed in what she was reading she didn't notice Delaen approach. She's an intriguing character and it's such a unique approach of you to take by writing from a daedra's perspective. Nice work.
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   LadyofChaos

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   16 September 2014, 5:38PM

   Amazing work again!!
   Thanks for the link again
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   matherz4

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   15 September 2014, 10:03PM

   Brilliant new chapter sean the writing in the book with the documentation on succubi is so well done m8 and very intriguing info as well as the books images which is very cool stuff and love that drawing u put in it . i kinda feel sorry for poor Delaen dosent get to have the full experience or should i say remember the experience of spending a night with Teyla XD iam sure he would willing give his years for her, i would anyways XP.
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   15 September 2014, 4:53PM

   Sean Thats a new brilliant Chapter. A deep impressive Story and excellent Pictures . Oh and Teyla.....she is a wonderful and unique Lady.
   
   And many thanks for the link.
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    15 September 2014, 8:32AM

    Super chapter Sean!
    Your shots of Teyla "feeding" were nicely done and your detail work on the images in the book is excellent. Great description of Succubus Lore too!
    
    (Thanks for the link)