This sounds pretty good, however I'd recommend leaving any lines that are meant to be his internal monologue as is, since it wouldnt make sense for the voice in his head to sound like it's coming through a voice filter. Like the "This is perfect, I can release the Batscanner and search for the workers." line doesnt need to be altered since you can see that he's just thinking that, he isnt speaking aloud
First off, I always found that to be a dumb way to look at Batman's psychology as it basically ignores any and all nuance, and secondly, that doesnt mean that the voice in his head would sound like it's coming through a voice modulator. Like logistically, that makes no sense.
I feel like the amount of work it would take to look at the entire script and pick out the lines that are internal monologue wouldn't really be worth it.
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